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Poetry On Leave

The words around me
trying to catch attention....
for a place in poem

eagerly they wait
who will be the luckiest....
a tough selection

I love all of them
thus fail to pick a single....
poetry on leave



© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (17th April 2011)

on writing and wordssenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 27, 2011 at 10:48 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Kashinath. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick

April 22, 2011 at 9:41 AM

enjoyed the read here Kashinath.

Poet Destroyer A

April 21, 2011 at 7:26 PM

Your awesome, K.Kar. a very lovely poem... enjoyed,..linda

Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2011 at 11:42 PM

Opposite of cuckold would be "lucky guy" I guess. hahaha

Wilma Neels

April 20, 2011 at 4:41 AM

Hey there Kash, awesome and clever write, this had me smiling.. ;) how are you doing? glad that your heart is still pounding.. so it is only that stupid man's problem if he doesn't like eye bags lol :)

Carolyn Devonshire

April 19, 2011 at 9:24 AM

Hi Kash, I'm still away fishing, but I did return your email. Thanks for your concern. Prayers are appreciated. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2011 at 11:42 PM

Just here to say hello, Kash!

Manouchka Doreus

April 18, 2011 at 5:10 PM

creative and unique

Nette Onclaud

April 18, 2011 at 11:44 AM

dang! the glitches here are far to many, lol! greeeeat work, kashi as always! :) huggs, nette

Jack Horne

April 18, 2011 at 6:43 AM

Thanks, Kash : ) Great poem - I could visualise the words jostling one another and nudging you, with , 'Me! Me!' LOL Lovely imaginative piece

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 18, 2011 at 1:06 AM

How very clever Kash to give words such a personality to be waiting for the writer to use them.. interesting my friend and enjoyable thought too.. now if u check my blog u will see u are a winner in my contest.. I listed them all on my blog because having problems with finalizing contest and posting winners list from Friday morning luv..waiting for Administration to fix it ..but u are a winner ..congrats luv..

Andrea Dietrich

April 17, 2011 at 6:36 PM

Kashinath,this is a clever little haiku on a process of writing that I know I personally struggle with sometimes. A nice reflective poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2011 at 9:39 AM

Synonyms of words jumble through our heads while we write, Kash, and finding the one that expresses our thoughts most clearly can be difficult. Enjoyed your poem very much - lots of us can relate to this! I'm out of town fishing until after Easter -- returning home May 4. Have an EKG May 5. Have a wonderful Easter, my friend! Love, Carolyn

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