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Poetry On Leave

The words around me
trying to catch attention....
for a place in poem

eagerly they wait
who will be the luckiest....
a tough selection

I love all of them
thus fail to pick a single....
poetry on leave



© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (17th April 2011)

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/27/2011 10:48:00 AM Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Kashinath. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/22/2011 9:41:00 AM enjoyed the read here Kashinath. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/21/2011 7:26:00 PM Your awesome, K.Kar. a very lovely poem... enjoyed,..linda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/20/2011 11:42:00 PM Opposite of cuckold would be "lucky guy" I guess. hahaha Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/20/2011 4:41:00 AM Hey there Kash, awesome and clever write, this had me smiling.. ;) how are you doing? glad that your heart is still pounding.. so it is only that stupid man's problem if he doesn't like eye bags lol :) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/19/2011 9:24:00 AM Hi Kash, I'm still away fishing, but I did return your email. Thanks for your concern. Prayers are appreciated. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/18/2011 11:42:00 PM Just here to say hello, Kash! Login to Reply

Manouchka Doreus Date: 4/18/2011 5:10:00 PM creative and unique Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/18/2011 11:44:00 AM dang! the glitches here are far to many, lol! greeeeat work, kashi as always! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/18/2011 6:43:00 AM Thanks, Kash : ) Great poem - I could visualise the words jostling one another and nudging you, with , 'Me! Me!' LOL Lovely imaginative piece Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/18/2011 1:06:00 AM How very clever Kash to give words such a personality to be waiting for the writer to use them.. interesting my friend and enjoyable thought too.. now if u check my blog u will see u are a winner in my contest.. I listed them all on my blog because having problems with finalizing contest and posting winners list from Friday morning luv..waiting for Administration to fix it ..but u are a winner ..congrats luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/17/2011 6:36:00 PM Kashinath,this is a clever little haiku on a process of writing that I know I personally struggle with sometimes. A nice reflective poem! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/17/2011 9:39:00 AM Synonyms of words jumble through our heads while we write, Kash, and finding the one that expresses our thoughts most clearly can be difficult. Enjoyed your poem very much - lots of us can relate to this! I'm out of town fishing until after Easter -- returning home May 4. Have an EKG May 5. Have a wonderful Easter, my friend! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply