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Poetry On Leave

The words around me trying to catch attention.... for a place in poem eagerly they wait who will be the luckiest.... a tough selection I love all of them thus fail to pick a single.... poetry on leave © kashinath karmakar ==================== By:kashinath karmakar (17th April 2011)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2011 10:48:00 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Kashinath. Hopefully they will get the site back up and running correctly for everyone soon. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/22/2011 9:41:00 AM

enjoyed the read here Kashinath.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 7:26:00 PM

Your awesome, K.Kar. a very lovely poem... enjoyed,..linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2011 11:42:00 PM

Opposite of cuckold would be "lucky guy" I guess. hahaha

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/20/2011 4:41:00 AM

Hey there Kash, awesome and clever write, this had me smiling.. ;) how are you doing? glad that your heart is still pounding.. so it is only that stupid man's problem if he doesn't like eye bags lol :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/19/2011 9:24:00 AM

Hi Kash, I'm still away fishing, but I did return your email. Thanks for your concern. Prayers are appreciated. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2011 11:42:00 PM

Just here to say hello, Kash!

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 4/18/2011 5:10:00 PM

creative and unique

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2011 11:44:00 AM

dang! the glitches here are far to many, lol! greeeeat work, kashi as always! :) huggs, nette

Jack Horne

Date: 4/18/2011 6:43:00 AM

Thanks, Kash : ) Great poem - I could visualise the words jostling one another and nudging you, with , 'Me! Me!' LOL Lovely imaginative piece

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2011 1:06:00 AM

How very clever Kash to give words such a personality to be waiting for the writer to use them.. interesting my friend and enjoyable thought too.. now if u check my blog u will see u are a winner in my contest.. I listed them all on my blog because having problems with finalizing contest and posting winners list from Friday morning luv..waiting for Administration to fix it ..but u are a winner ..congrats luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2011 6:36:00 PM

Kashinath,this is a clever little haiku on a process of writing that I know I personally struggle with sometimes. A nice reflective poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2011 9:39:00 AM

Synonyms of words jumble through our heads while we write, Kash, and finding the one that expresses our thoughts most clearly can be difficult. Enjoyed your poem very much - lots of us can relate to this! I'm out of town fishing until after Easter -- returning home May 4. Have an EKG May 5. Have a wonderful Easter, my friend! Love, Carolyn