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a rainbow shatters
and scatters laughter and tears
splatters on pages
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, David! Very creative, explosive and inspiring senryu! ~ Regards // paul
De La Croes Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Thanks, Paul, and congratulations on your awesome winning work! Cheers, David
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:23 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De La Croes Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Thank you, Sunshine, and congratulations to you, too!
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:55 PM
I loved the alliteration and how you got three rhyming words into this one while keeping it still very senryu! Love it. Congrats in my contest.
De La Croes Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 8:21 AM
Thank you for the contest, and your kind consideration of my work, Andrea! Greetings, David
Gazbowski Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:53 PM
A delightful haiku James.
De La Croes Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 2:14 AM
Thanks for visiting, Lenny. Yeah, sometimes even I forget my own name! Cheers, David
Gazbowski Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Oops - David is what I meant to write.
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