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Poetry Badminton




That’s how some poets roll the the dice here, don’t you see?
I think it makes sense, if your life is all about me, me, me!

Old poetry friendships ………like garbage, tossed dowm
a mildewed, stenchy, drain.
As some “must “ be read or you are tossed out like a cat in 
the cold, pelting, raim!

They forgot those old days, when they wrote little and had 
Very few readers.
But now, you are useless friend, and tossed into the trash, 
like a broken, comfy, living room seater?

So, don’t feel bad, if this happens to you, they forgot you, 
so move on.
For you have  a poetic gift, with fun, beauty and inspiration 
to pass on.L

And yes, you can read any other poets who do not 
read you.
Poetry badminton, is a sad game, I most
heartily eschew!

Life throws curveballs our way, but it’s not great 
to live as though comments  were our all.
Spouses, childhood friends, church,pets, life 
celebrations ..demand our all.

We are duped into thinking that keystrrokes
mean friends.
I used to think so, too but learned that’s where 
the story sadly ends.
          
                      ~Poem 2~

                       3/9/2024

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Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Feelings aside -- you know, of course, that we men are totally insensitive -- what happened to 'Poetry Pickleball?' lol. ~ Gruff and Tough
Elliott Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:41 PM
An honest, heartfelt poem on how sometimes friendships are not what they seem in all kinds of life situations although your eloquent poem speaks mainly of some PS friendships, dear Pangie. You pen so truthfully. We treasure our genuine friendships. Many of God's and life's blessings to you, good friend. xoxx
Romios Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 1:57 PM
He thanks, Regina, what a wonderful response. I know who reads me for a comment back~ its not a good feeling. It is a thrill and a connection felt when response are from the heart not for points…they are rare. Others? No better than corrupt politicians. Who blow seedy comments in your ear and lto sound impressive! I can smell dishonesty. I have always found the comments race to be repulsive! I may be weird, but I really don’t care how many comments people make..That’s not poetry that’s running for popularity.. encourages terrible habit called dishonesty…its political. gamesmanship. And its sad. Disingemiousmess is a lie. Lies are sins, Pangie x Pangie x
Fisher Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Another great title, Pangie! Tossed down the mildewed, stenchy, drain is quite vivid and gets your point across well. Badminton's a ball, but like you say, poetry badminton's a sad game; so hard not to be the birdie sometimes.
Romios Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 7:03 PM
Double stars for you getting the point of this one. Pangie x
Romios Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 7:01 PM
David, youknow I have a zealous passion for honesty. I do not hace a saccharine taste for piling up comments. Nor do I hand them out with one or two words luke an achoo…so I can get people to read me.mL Kiser chided me my first came here and complained about not enough comment. She kind of hit me over the head with the bath and said .. WELL DID YOU COME HERE TO GET COMMENTS OR TO WRITE POETRY? I think you get my point..lOL on the birdie. And I like to see new people getting credit. I annot comment as much as I once did. Many here can. Pangie xx
Empress Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 3:13 AM
So true dear pangie and how well written is this. I really loved your title and made me read this today and i must say i agree, and i resonated with so many lines especially “Spouses, childhood friends, church,pets, life celebrations ..demand our all.” Couldnt have said it any better, powerful write, so good to read you after a while. Sending you light always
Romios Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 5:41 AM
Ink, I know you comment to many.which I think is awesome! There are people here that have visual problems who may not be able to as well. There are people like myself, who type 12 wpm ,vs those who type 100 wpm. I think people should try to type with one finger like I do. It takes forever! Try it yourself! It’s ridiculous. We must care for our lives, p first and everything I listed. People have spouses who are il…poets with Parkinsons. too. And others in pain. I send good wishes! I I’m glad you read this and honored by your support and visit…keep up your good work, here! Pangie xx
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