Poetry

Baring of your soul
Dancing naked for the world
Deep tension is eased



Just a note of thanks to all who are encouraging my work and reading my poetry.
I so appreciate all of you.  Poetry Soup has become a bright spot in my life. :)  

May a butterfly land on your shoulder (a poem that has yet to be created)
Willow
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Goswami Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Very nice. I enjoyed your unique thoughts. Best wishes from India. Long live with poetry. well wisher
Miers Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:35 PM
beautiful piece. a flash of brilliance. pondering on this itself relieves tension. thanks.
Helppi Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:13 PM
Smiling
Meade Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Baring one's soul and dancing naked does not come easy -- but once done -- it is freeing. I like the comparison -- keep it up!
Lawrence Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 6:33 AM
thank you David, being open has been difficult for me, poetry is such a wonderful outlet for me.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 6:34 PM
ahhh, I love your little note. I hope a butterfly lands on my shoulder too!! and very soon. Welcome here.
Lawrence Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 6:31 AM
thank you Andrea, I have to write the butterfly poem soon....it is stewing as we communicate.
Boyd Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Glad to have you in our international family :)
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Lolvey Haiku Willow:-) I don't know how I coped with life before I started writing Willow - its my lifeline especially at the moment - enjoy your journey my friend and you will soar like a butterfly:-) Hugs jan xx
Lawrence Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 6:13 PM
Thank you Jan, I am truly loving the process! Wishing you all great things! Willow :)
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