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Baring of your soul Dancing naked for the world Deep tension is eased Just a note of thanks to all who are encouraging my work and reading my poetry. I so appreciate all of you. Poetry Soup has become a bright spot in my life. :) May a butterfly land on your shoulder (a poem that has yet to be created) Willow

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/21/2015 3:48:00 PM

Very nice. I enjoyed your unique thoughts. Best wishes from India. Long live with poetry. well wisher

Michael Miers

Date: 11/3/2014 6:35:00 PM

beautiful piece. a flash of brilliance. pondering on this itself relieves tension. thanks.

Dan Helppi

Date: 11/2/2014 7:13:00 PM

Smiling

David Meade

Date: 10/21/2014 9:51:00 PM

Baring one's soul and dancing naked does not come easy -- but once done -- it is freeing. I like the comparison -- keep it up!

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/22/2014 6:33:00 AM

thank you David, being open has been difficult for me, poetry is such a wonderful outlet for me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2014 6:34:00 PM

ahhh, I love your little note. I hope a butterfly lands on my shoulder too!! and very soon. Welcome here.

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/22/2014 6:31:00 AM

thank you Andrea, I have to write the butterfly poem soon....it is stewing as we communicate.

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 10/21/2014 6:16:00 PM

Glad to have you in our international family :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2014 6:10:00 PM

Lolvey Haiku Willow:-) I don't know how I coped with life before I started writing Willow - its my lifeline especially at the moment - enjoy your journey my friend and you will soar like a butterfly:-) Hugs jan xx

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/21/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I am truly loving the process! Wishing you all great things! Willow :)