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Pour with will your molten soul
On lyric molds that is your art
Every beat of hammers bold
To shape, imbue, impart
Rhymes ring true in that honest forge
Your heart
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Faure Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Enjoyed the poem thanks!
Al-Khalili Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 9:20 PM
This snip of a poem makes me want to urge more of its growth! Is it complete?! If it is, it makes me feel incomplete but it is the epitome of short but sweet. I love "in that honest forge" of one's heart, of another, a forging, welding of mix metals, alloys unholy like hell yet blessed by the heavens to further impart, impart onto life, imbue breath and being, and shape the world. I truly loved your poem! There's many ways to read it. It is captioned as a metaphor in my mind!
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August 16, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured today. I love this succinct and deeply true poem. Speaks to the poets heart.
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