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Pour with will your molten soul On lyric molds that is your art Every beat of hammers bold To shape, imbue, impart Rhymes ring true in that honest forge Your heart

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Date: 8/17/2024 3:14:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem thanks!
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Date: 8/16/2024 9:20:00 PM
This snip of a poem makes me want to urge more of its growth! Is it complete?! If it is, it makes me feel incomplete but it is the epitome of short but sweet. I love "in that honest forge" of one's heart, of another, a forging, welding of mix metals, alloys unholy like hell yet blessed by the heavens to further impart, impart onto life, imbue breath and being, and shape the world. I truly loved your poem! There's many ways to read it. It is captioned as a metaphor in my mind!
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Date: 8/16/2024 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured today. I love this succinct and deeply true poem. Speaks to the poets heart.
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