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Poetic Words

Through so many poems I tried to explain. I've tried to paint a picture in your brain. Through my words we've popped champagne. I was your Tarzan and you were my Jane. Through my words I've tried to take your body beyond this physical plane. You were my honeycomb and I was your candy cane. Through my words we've made love in the rain. You came, screamed my name as I entered your domain. Through my words I was serious yet I tried to entertain. Your heart is what I've done my best to obtain. So I pray my words were worthwhile, And I succeeded making your heart smile. *Here's for you sunshine....

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/18/2009 10:06:00 AM

Beautiful and lovely poem showing your deep love for your beloved. Keep writing and it would give you lot of inner pleasure and peace. Thank you for your soup mail. Hope you find my poem Wake up O an inspiring one for you and for all. My best wishes for a Merry Christmas, May Christmas & the New Year Bring for You Love, Peace, Health, Luck and Prosperity And lots of imagination and colors To Your Poetry in the Year 2010 Ravindra

Fallen Angel :

Date: 12/17/2009 7:30:00 PM

Im miss sunshine myself....and I do melt everytime I read it!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/14/2009 11:01:00 PM

Your poetic words are as sweet as Candy and im sure when reading these words,tihs sunshine of yours is gonna melt..:)Lets open champagne,We re Tarzan and Jane,make love in the rain,We're Sunhine and Candy Cane,A verse on paper ,a heart to obtain,abig smile on our faces,removes all the pain..Im sure your sunshine would love this,,i wonder who is this lucky girl?:)excellent poem,sweet indeed and a fav-youe friend Charma

Janette Fisher

Date: 12/14/2009 12:23:00 PM

Jimmy - a wonderful piece - keep writing and keep sharing. Many regards Janette

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/14/2009 11:26:00 AM

Well, you've said it all here, Jimmy! Your sunshine is smiling, I am sure!! Great job as usual. Prepare for more comments! Thanks for sharing this from your heart! Love and peace, Audrey

P Sheart

Date: 12/14/2009 8:46:00 AM

Hi Jimmy, Hope you're doing well. Here's hoping your lady love reads this. For those of us who already have partners we know the value of having love and friendship in our lives. I am very blessed in this life now that's for sure. I wish this for you and for the woman who is meant for you. Keep your spirit strong Jimmy and keep writing. It's good for the soul. Love Light Patricia