Poetic Thoughts

As far as my mind goes, 
I see nothing but poetic thoughts, 
with me indulging in her dark big 
brown eyes,her skin smooth and tasteful 
as the essence of an African chocolate, 
I see her smile as the sunrises, 
Which reflects her beauty & strength, 
Her hair as black as charcoal, 
Scented with the natural herbs 
that grace the Fields of Africa, 
Her lips inviting and juicy, 
her body carved perfectly 
by the hands of the Almighty, 
In the shape of a co-co-kola bottle, 
Showing her true freckles which shows 
her courage, 
Her conversation is refreshing as the 
water falls of mount Kilimanjaro, 
Her sense of humor lets me know 
it's okay to keep in touch 
with yourself 
Her presence gives birth to love, 
Asserted with elegance,her hands on my 
shoulder assure me being romantic is vibrant 
then she asked me,do you want to jitter- 
bug(dance)with me,thats when I realized 
It's all just my poetic thoughts of Love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/27/2008 9:28:00 AM
I love it...great writing...I can't jitterbug either...Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 12/27/2008 7:54:00 AM
Almost like a postcard, the image of her is so real...beautiful write, always, Christy
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