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Poetic Stones

Mossy river stones,
Alongside the forest banks:
Compose odes to trees.

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Krista Kurth

September 18, 2009 at 12:46 PM

Raul, I love the idea of mossy stones composing odes to trees! Inspired haiku. Krista

Tyler Martin

September 10, 2009 at 6:50 PM

You are pulling from every direction.

James Peranteau

September 8, 2009 at 3:02 PM

You know this one rocks Raul !! Great Haiku Sir !!! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 8, 2009 at 10:05 AM

You have a winner here Raul. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

September 8, 2009 at 3:02 AM

Beautiful visual sounds Raul.Thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian

Karla Null

September 7, 2009 at 10:04 PM

Nice Raul, it perfectly matches the picture....Karla

Carrie Richards

September 7, 2009 at 6:51 PM

You write as an artist would paint...such an outstanding poem, Raul !!! Love, Carrie

Abe Lopez

September 7, 2009 at 6:32 PM

the sound of water flowing over mossy rocks creates such a majestic sound........lovely write!

Cesar Cantu

September 7, 2009 at 6:12 PM

River stones are mezmerizing @.@ they are so...round, infinite, unvertexed jojojojo @.@ thanks a lot for the read and for the comments =D

Doris Culverhouse

September 7, 2009 at 5:50 PM

nicely done, is this for the picture contest? I like the play on words.

K K Iloduba Jnr

September 7, 2009 at 5:41 PM

Hurl these stones on all.Heavenly Haiku!

Donny Ingraham

September 7, 2009 at 5:18 PM

I like this one here

Charmaine Chircop

September 7, 2009 at 4:54 PM

Poetic Stones---hard stones--strong title---mossy river stones composing poems to the trees,though this is a Haiku i can feel a senryu through verses ...Excellent Haiku Raul----Charma