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Poetic Stones

Mossy river stones, Alongside the forest banks: Compose odes to trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 12:46:00 PM
Raul, I love the idea of mossy stones composing odes to trees! Inspired haiku. Krista
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:50:00 PM
You are pulling from every direction.
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:02:00 PM
You know this one rocks Raul !! Great Haiku Sir !!! james
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Date: 9/8/2009 10:05:00 AM
You have a winner here Raul. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:02:00 AM
Beautiful visual sounds Raul.Thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian
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Date: 9/7/2009 10:04:00 PM
Nice Raul, it perfectly matches the picture....Karla
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:51:00 PM
You write as an artist would paint...such an outstanding poem, Raul !!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:32:00 PM
the sound of water flowing over mossy rocks creates such a majestic sound........lovely write!
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:12:00 PM
River stones are mezmerizing @.@ they are so...round, infinite, unvertexed jojojojo @.@ thanks a lot for the read and for the comments =D
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:50:00 PM
nicely done, is this for the picture contest? I like the play on words.
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:41:00 PM
Hurl these stones on all.Heavenly Haiku!
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:18:00 PM
I like this one here
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:54:00 PM
Poetic Stones---hard stones--strong title---mossy river stones composing poems to the trees,though this is a Haiku i can feel a senryu through verses ...Excellent Haiku Raul----Charma
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:46:00 PM
Soup mail.
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:10:00 PM
Hi RaulA beautiful vision you paint with words, very well written. A lovely Haiku! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:04:00 PM
The rocks are crying out. Love the Haiku. Sara
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Date: 9/7/2009 4:04:00 PM
Oh this is wonderful Raul! Love the imagery and the thought of the mossy river stones composing odes to trees!! Great write! ~Trudy~
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