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Poetic Stones

Mossy river stones, Alongside the forest banks: Compose odes to trees.

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Krista Kurth

Date: 9/18/2009 12:46:00 PM

Raul, I love the idea of mossy stones composing odes to trees! Inspired haiku. Krista

Tyler Martin

Date: 9/10/2009 6:50:00 PM

You are pulling from every direction.

James Peranteau

Date: 9/8/2009 3:02:00 PM

You know this one rocks Raul !! Great Haiku Sir !!! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2009 10:05:00 AM

You have a winner here Raul. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/8/2009 3:02:00 AM

Beautiful visual sounds Raul.Thank you for your welcome comments today.rgds Brian

Karla Null

Date: 9/7/2009 10:04:00 PM

Nice Raul, it perfectly matches the picture....Karla

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/7/2009 6:51:00 PM

You write as an artist would paint...such an outstanding poem, Raul !!! Love, Carrie

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/7/2009 6:32:00 PM

the sound of water flowing over mossy rocks creates such a majestic sound........lovely write!

Cesar Cantu

Date: 9/7/2009 6:12:00 PM

River stones are mezmerizing @.@ they are so...round, infinite, unvertexed jojojojo @.@ thanks a lot for the read and for the comments =D

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/7/2009 5:50:00 PM

nicely done, is this for the picture contest? I like the play on words.

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 9/7/2009 5:41:00 PM

Hurl these stones on all.Heavenly Haiku!

Donny Ingraham

Date: 9/7/2009 5:18:00 PM

I like this one here

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/7/2009 4:54:00 PM

Poetic Stones---hard stones--strong title---mossy river stones composing poems to the trees,though this is a Haiku i can feel a senryu through verses ...Excellent Haiku Raul----Charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 9/7/2009 4:46:00 PM

Soup mail.

P Sheart

Date: 9/7/2009 4:10:00 PM

Hi RaulA beautiful vision you paint with words, very well written. A lovely Haiku! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/7/2009 4:04:00 PM

Oh this is wonderful Raul! Love the imagery and the thought of the mossy river stones composing odes to trees!! Great write! ~Trudy~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2009 4:04:00 PM

The rocks are crying out. Love the Haiku. Sara