Poetic Play

Experiencing each of your words so diverse While riding upon your gentle poetic verse How I could live inside each of your lines Emerged into your pieces so well defined Has me wanting to give into you in every way Let me give you a bit of my special poetic play I only wish my very words could compare Wanting to compliment your artistic versed flair You have me loving your poetic verse flow Appreciating all your talent that you show Wishing your perfection would be about me Allowing words to engulf me setting me free It’s in between all of your poetic lines I will lay Seducing me with your own poetic versed play Letting me return it with my play all night long Bet you’ll enjoy what I offer, you can't go wrong
8/16/2020
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Watt Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 5:14 PM
Brenda, this is poetic and playful, and I'm sure a great delight to the poet in question! Lovely writing and I enjoyed the audio as well. Enjoy your day ~ John
Chiri Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:18 AM
John so glad you enjoyed it! Lol I hate my voice but I appreciate it!:)
Fleming Avatar
August 30, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Although it still retains a standard poetic feel to it all, it does have the flavour of a rapping poem -- and who better at rap than you, Poetess! I really do enjoy those "raps" of yours. Excellent collaboration. With warmest wishes. :) john
Chiri Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:17 AM
Ahh John! So glad you enjoyed it!:) you have been missed!:)
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 4:16 PM
So lovely and smoothly flowing, Brenda. Thanks for the win I got in your contest, while I am here!
Chiri Avatar
September 3, 2020 at 5:17 AM
Andrea much appreciated thank you!:)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Such a joy in rhyme. I love it. God bless you, dear lady. Happy writing
Chiri Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Thank you Gina!:)
Chiri Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 9:29 PM
https://soundcloud.com/brenda-chiri-649321782/rebel-calliope-reading It’s done as a collab between me and a friend if you want to listen!
Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Enjoyed this romantic write, Brenda--a sweet invitation to play in your rhythms...you always weave your words beautifully.
Chiri Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Vijay thank you so much!:)
Leffanta Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 11:59 AM
plus it is all in print! Aloha! Rico
Chiri Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Lol thank you!:)
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