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02/04/24

Seventh place 

Contest Di11Y Da11Y 

POETIC INHALATION

     
          POETIC  INHALATION 

           As waves thrashed on emotion,
           causing sense of suffocation ,
           Mind needs poetic inhalation
           to lighten pain,
           to brighten joy,
           to enlighten soul.

           Emotive urge surges,
           Ardent ardour adorns,
           Dormant dream desires.
           
             Ensuing exhalation of ennui .
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February 9, 2024 at 7:36 PM
" Emotive urge surges, Ardent ardour adorns" - Great inner experience beautifully shared. Congratulations!
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