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brightly turning leaves autumn sweeps both hill and dell. . . imagery’s harvest For Brian Strand's Contest: A POESY any theme/form max 10 lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/12/2012 3:24:00 PM
i love the word sweeps, that really gets the imagery going....
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:24:00 AM
Nice picture of fall you have painted here--kash
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:52:00 AM
my favorite season. warm congrats - a beauty! soup mail. xoxo
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:10:00 PM
Just Great! I love the images of sweeping the leaves up and down. Congrats on you win in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:55:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhh a more true haiku! not many in the winners circle teach....
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Date: 6/17/2010 3:55:00 PM
So filled fantastic imagery..I close my eyes after reading this and all come to light! My favorite season and if I could I'd be there already! Thanks for your comments, Andrea! Love, Audrey
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:53:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your success in my contest with this awesome entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:15:00 AM
Robert Frost said that a crop is a crop but the grandeur of the color for a brief time is awesome...Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:12:00 AM
Lovely haiku Andrew thanks for the lovely comment on my poem :) love Jayne
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:46:00 PM
Beautifully spoken! Jeralynn
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:50:00 AM
enjoyed!! It is 96 degrees today and hard to think of autumn.
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:26:00 AM
Beauty is the image that is bound to appear in the pathway of our journey toward perfection. Nature has it right, it is humans who must learn to recognize beauty in perfection's pathway. As we learn to value beauty in nature,s imagery harvest, we will learn the inner perfect nature of ourselves. Good luck with your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:52:00 AM
Great Beauty in words and a lovely imaginary used in the Senryu . My best wishes for the contest. And many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot. I have placed a background note as suggested by you and shall be placing it in all parts. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra.....Andrea Dietrich.
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:21:00 AM
tmfs
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:20:00 AM
This is a beauty. Do you scent a winner?lol! So Andy re blog-I love almonds,cocounut and choc?Is that wrong?haha!love your blogs as much as your poems.I wish we lived close by,all us soupers,you would taste my baco choc kisses.they re made of biscuits,vermouth,nuts,some cocoa,and melting choc!and the cocönut once yummy,haha!pleasure to read you dear friend!C
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:09:00 AM
Bright Haiku, Andrea! Especially the secind line! Wish you best of luck in Linda-Marie's contest and thank you for your kind comments...Have a great Sunday! Love, Gert
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Date: 6/13/2010 2:34:00 AM
Clever last line! You certainly did a great job of harvesting that autumn imagery. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :) PS thanks for all your comments on my sonnets :)
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Date: 6/13/2010 12:00:00 AM
hmm, makes me think. oh, now i wish i lived 'inside' poetry(: with senryu's and haiku's.. then maybe i'd be happier, and not so moody. how could i be when i would be resting in a world of poetic falls. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/12/2010 10:13:00 PM
I really enjoyed the images you put here Andrea :) Can't help but feel so fall-y (haha is there even such a word??) --nikko :) still trying to come up with an entry for this one...
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:46:00 PM
beautiful entry!
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:47:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea! Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:40:00 PM
Superb thought with wonderful images, Andrea. I enjoyed - imagery's harvest. What a nice expression
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:40:00 PM
gorgeous images! Andrea! jimbo
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