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Poetic Fall

brightly turning leaves
autumn sweeps both hill and dell. . . 
imagery’s harvest 


For Brian Strand's Contest: A POESY any theme/form max 10 lines

seasonssenryu

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Harry Horsman

October 12, 2012 at 3:24 PM

i love the word sweeps, that really gets the imagery going....

Kash Poet

February 13, 2011 at 4:24 AM

Nice picture of fall you have painted here--kash

Sharon Winter

June 25, 2010 at 9:52 AM

my favorite season. warm congrats - a beauty! soup mail. xoxo

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 21, 2010 at 5:46 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Andrea. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

June 20, 2010 at 9:10 PM

Just Great! I love the images of sweeping the leaves up and down. Congrats on you win in the contest! Dan C

Debbie Guzzi

June 18, 2010 at 4:55 AM

ahhhhhhhhh a more true haiku! not many in the winners circle teach....

Audrey Haick

June 17, 2010 at 3:55 PM

So filled fantastic imagery..I close my eyes after reading this and all come to light! My favorite season and if I could I'd be there already! Thanks for your comments, Andrea! Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2010 at 8:53 PM

Congrats Andrea on your success in my contest with this awesome entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. Linda-Marie

Sara Kendrick

June 14, 2010 at 5:15 AM

Robert Frost said that a crop is a crop but the grandeur of the color for a brief time is awesome...Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Jayne Eggins

June 14, 2010 at 5:12 AM

Lovely haiku Andrew thanks for the lovely comment on my poem :) love Jayne

Jeralynn Clark

June 13, 2010 at 4:46 PM

Beautifully spoken! Jeralynn

Doris Culverhouse

June 13, 2010 at 11:50 AM

enjoyed!! It is 96 degrees today and hard to think of autumn.

John Freeman

June 13, 2010 at 10:26 AM

Beauty is the image that is bound to appear in the pathway of our journey toward perfection. Nature has it right, it is humans who must learn to recognize beauty in perfection's pathway. As we learn to value beauty in nature,s imagery harvest, we will learn the inner perfect nature of ourselves. Good luck with your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses

Ravindra K Kapoor

June 13, 2010 at 7:52 AM

Great Beauty in words and a lovely imaginary used in the Senryu . My best wishes for the contest. And many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot. I have placed a background note as suggested by you and shall be placing it in all parts. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra.....Andrea Dietrich.

C.C Bloomsfield

June 13, 2010 at 6:21 AM

tmfs

C.C Bloomsfield

June 13, 2010 at 6:20 AM

This is a beauty. Do you scent a winner?lol! So Andy re blog-I love almonds,cocounut and choc?Is that wrong?haha!love your blogs as much as your poems.I wish we lived close by,all us soupers,you would taste my baco choc kisses.they re made of biscuits,vermouth,nuts,some cocoa,and melting choc!and the cocönut once yummy,haha!pleasure to read you dear friend!C

Gert W. Knop

June 13, 2010 at 6:09 AM

Bright Haiku, Andrea! Especially the secind line! Wish you best of luck in Linda-Marie's contest and thank you for your kind comments...Have a great Sunday! Love, Gert

Sharon Tideswell

June 13, 2010 at 2:34 AM

Clever last line! You certainly did a great job of harvesting that autumn imagery. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :) PS thanks for all your comments on my sonnets :)

Lynette Chachere

June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM

hmm, makes me think. oh, now i wish i lived 'inside' poetry(: with senryu's and haiku's.. then maybe i'd be happier, and not so moody. how could i be when i would be resting in a world of poetic falls. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 12, 2010 at 10:13 PM

I really enjoyed the images you put here Andrea :) Can't help but feel so fall-y (haha is there even such a word??) --nikko :) still trying to come up with an entry for this one...