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11/28/2023 Let’s be fools and pretend this planet won’t implode. Beneath a mosaic ceiling, hiding in a grand,poetry dome. Where ethics and morality are shoved in an oaken drawer, And with relief and a sigh, we want to see them, never more. Let’s, above all- not look at the enemies within our very gates. Villainous citizens, with anti-freedom masks, cover their faces and ponderous pates! Vague traces of hope where the god of censorship shines, tis the rule for freedom hating fools. That’s how civilizations crumble and only morons get to rule! We jaunt in gleeful play, look firmly, smilingly, the other way? Woebegone poets, losing, quite willingly, our freedom everyday.. Pen thee only of laughter and fun, never of reality, lost, prized, poet ones. Adore the lies from Tik-Tok, and social media, the wars in our very countries has already begun! We walk American streets, already unfree, antisemitism on fire! But hide we in our grand poetry dome,a most deadly desire! Outside the dome, others cover their ears, eyes and vacant hearts. Selfish ones who care not who is in battle today, nor what young souls will this very day depart. A write like this will few comments ever have…no loss! But I did not write it to be a pleasure, for freedom has a cost. The sun sets sooner now,as holidays of .green and red do near. And darker still on Israel, with hostages whose only breath, is fear!

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Date: 11/29/2023 6:19:00 AM
Wow, Pangie, you are a woman of Truth. You are so very courageous. Your soul and pen flows with the many sorrows going on in this dark world. Am Yisrael Chai. xxxxxxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/29/2023 9:18:00 AM
My friend Regina. There were so many friends, in the hundreds, who demanded, speak truth, or be still. I was not raised to be expressive but to please others. I loathed it! It still makes me.cringe! Freedom lovers exist in all countries. Sadly, they will tie themselves to a tree…rarely stand for another person! I know you to be the exception to the rule and never brag on all you do.you are a blessing to the earth. Thanks for being so.. Am Yisrael Chai!! Pangie xxxx
Date: 11/28/2023 6:13:00 PM
Just want to thank you for this write... and the last two lines (while many have forgotten the innocent hostages taken)... Reg. those hostages: One reason Hamas won't let the Red Cross see them is that at least 50% of the hostages are being used as shield on the front lines of the fighting!. Barbarism, as usual, for Hamas...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, again... Bottom line: Israelis will get up from this nightmare and start building again; Palestinians will continue to destroy whomever is in their way. (And not just Jews either). Then they will whine to the world that they are the victims. That's the 'vicious cycle' that the news ought to be reporting... Oh, well. Ain't gonna happen.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/28/2023 7:11:00 PM
Dear Gershon, my heart goes out to you. And the many still sleeping on plastic chairs since Oct.7th!!Besides showing child- hostages…. films of unspeakable horrors. The UN turns its back ? Not unusual! And the world has gone beserk! Compassion is on holiday?American bases are attacked. The US does nothing? People just pawns? And the game of life or death? Sick,plain sick. Pangie xxxx
Date: 11/28/2023 5:27:00 PM
A poet such as yourself writes from the heart. Your natural talent is shared when you share your poems. This piece was very well written. It
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/28/2023 6:48:00 PM
Elena! I know you as a compassionate and an awesome person, dedicated to the wellbeing of people on this planet. You are not dedicated to you.! But to this planet. I am no queen of poetry,hardly..I feel for anyone thinking they are hot stuff. You are the “real deal”..a gift to this world! Thank you for being part of my life, Pangie xxxx

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