Poetic Afternoon

The heat of the 
midday sun keeps me indoors
But soon the day begins to turn into
    poetry 
as evening rolls in 
I see an old friend when 
   I step outside 
We chat about baseball    
The New York Metropolitans 
  went down to defeat 
Just a gam 
   Sometimes I think life is just a game 
But poetry reminds me
   there is another side 
to life 
    One glimpsed between 
the words 
   each ode I write 
contains the key to escaping 
the dullness of "absolute reality" 
The space between the silence 
  and the word
   is a space we can use for 
transcendence 
    Every line of poetry has the power 
to "drive the fingernail into the heart"
   Keep up the good work, poetic sisters and brothers
   The flow from your pens
is magic incarnate 
   You can touch the inner being 
  of all your readers
if you express
  your innermost feeling, dreams, and wishes 
on the page
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Matthew What honestly written words that really show what poetry is and does when writing and reading it. Thank you for the great comment on my Get The Facts poem.
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 10:05 AM
I am so happy to come upon this piece you have shared with us. It is so lighthearted and full of genuine feeling. Thank you for the sun in my day. Love, Carol
Sirak Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Wonderful write. I love the line "the space between the silence and the word" that space is filled with images and ideas flowing along.
Deschler Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 2:20 AM
I loved those last few inspiring lines! If you express your inner most feelings, you can touch the reader....that is so true! ....It does feel like a magic moment when the reader can experience what I was feeling as I wrote those words! You have done the same with this poem, Matthew! A terrific write!
Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 11:27 AM
ohh, i feel your heart through this piece...poetry becomes you, matthew.. huggs
Bauer Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:26 AM
this is wonderful, matthew! i love the line "but soon the day turns into poetry" - that is POETIC! thanks for brightening my morning...
Smith Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 11:46 PM
Well stated Matthew....stay true to your team they will rise again as will my White Sox....cheers
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