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Poetic Afternoon

The heat of the midday sun keeps me indoors But soon the day begins to turn into poetry as evening rolls in I see an old friend when I step outside We chat about baseball The New York Metropolitans went down to defeat Just a gam Sometimes I think life is just a game But poetry reminds me there is another side to life One glimpsed between the words each ode I write contains the key to escaping the dullness of "absolute reality" The space between the silence and the word is a space we can use for transcendence Every line of poetry has the power to "drive the fingernail into the heart" Keep up the good work, poetic sisters and brothers The flow from your pens is magic incarnate You can touch the inner being of all your readers if you express your innermost feeling, dreams, and wishes on the page

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Date: 9/24/2014 7:44:00 AM
Matthew What honestly written words that really show what poetry is and does when writing and reading it. Thank you for the great comment on my Get The Facts poem.
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:05:00 AM
I am so happy to come upon this piece you have shared with us. It is so lighthearted and full of genuine feeling. Thank you for the sun in my day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2014 6:31:00 AM
Wonderful write. I love the line "the space between the silence and the word" that space is filled with images and ideas flowing along.
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Date: 8/6/2014 2:20:00 AM
I loved those last few inspiring lines! If you express your inner most feelings, you can touch the reader....that is so true! ....It does feel like a magic moment when the reader can experience what I was feeling as I wrote those words! You have done the same with this poem, Matthew! A terrific write!
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Date: 8/5/2014 11:27:00 AM
ohh, i feel your heart through this piece...poetry becomes you, matthew.. huggs
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Date: 8/5/2014 5:26:00 AM
this is wonderful, matthew! i love the line "but soon the day turns into poetry" - that is POETIC! thanks for brightening my morning...
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Date: 8/4/2014 11:46:00 PM
Well stated Matthew....stay true to your team they will rise again as will my White Sox....cheers
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