Poems of the Electric Chair

"They got electric chairs there - just your size" ~ Mick, in The Heart is a Lonely Hunter by Carson McCullers

Just Your Size

A child awakes with eager eyes,
hoping for a Christmas surprise. 
The sun rises on God's glory,
a body in an abandoned quarry, 
and an electric chair...just your size.

When Chairs Went Electric

Back in nineteen sixty-five
When I sat down, I stayed alive - 
I wouldn't be sent to Hell. 
Oh, how I remember well - 
furniture was not eclectic 
when chairs went electric.
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Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 9:09 PM
'Just your size' chills me to the bone. ~ gw
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 11:18 PM
That's kind of the way I felt when I read those words in the book.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 5:16 PM
Hm, I was reading other's comments, and I, like Hilda, wondered what kind of electric chair, lol! But the comment you gave her was quite a concern, I suppose the household kind could turn dangerous if the wires somehow messed up! This left she and I with that ever-classic question "What is the poet saying in this poem?" :)
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 11:17 PM
Actually, when somebody says they have an electric chair just your size, it's not very nice, but it kind of reminds me of a totally different poem that I heard Johnny Cash recite: Ballad of the Harp Weaver by Edna St. Vincent Millay. It's really great. The last three words are "just my size". I think my brain got really, really mixed up, and I mixed that poem with the quote from the book and they don't have anything to do with each other, so you get a crazy poem that doesn't make any sense. My bottom line is that I recommend googling "Johnny Cash Ballad of the Harper Weaver" and playing it!
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 11:10 PM
What the heck is the poet talking about? I'm always the last to know! I think my purpose was to chill Gershon to the bone. The two poems are only superficially related because they both involve electric chairs, and I was lazy to submit a separate poem...and also, since I thought they might not be very good poems, I'd lump them together. In that sense, they deserve each other. As I try to understand what I was trying to mean with the first one, I see it wasn't well "executed", if you'll pardon my pun. I might try a rewrite. I think it has promise. The second one is just stupid. If I explain it, then you'll know how dumb it is.
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 1:00 PM
I like poems on the dark size. Great rhyming well inspired by that play I think you saw. I don't remember its plot. Did it involve an electric chair? Well that quote certainly did!
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 11:01 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I'm reading The Heart is a Lonely Hunter, and when I got to that quote, it triggered something dark in my brain.
Empress Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 8:49 AM
Gosh … thats deep! Electric chairs are scary! Definitely something dark. I hope you are doing well there, I like reading you, as you always have a very authentic voice. Sending you light, always dear David
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Ink - I'm doing OK. My mind just always seems to drift to the dark side now and then.
Greenhough Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 4:26 PM
I am reading about chairs, either that doomsday chair in prisons or that quivering massage chair that's supposed to help the back. I guess they both help with back pain. This is a fine contrast.
Crandall Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 9:33 AM
Sorry to hear you have back pain (if I understand). I used to have an electric massage chair. That's funny - I never made the connection - they're both electric chairs. I wonder if you can start with one and modify it to get the other.
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