Poems Alive

Notes preceding:
The blue poems,
How much you’re like my bride, wearing a blue skirt!

You said
If I couldn't come,you wouldn't be old
I said,
If you could come, the world would be happy

I said,
Please don't be lonely
You said
You couldn't, from that moment on
The loneliness is like the light blue skirt
Which is displayed in the closet in the winter
Was getting more and more lonely

Well
You have been used to the bright moonlight
I have been used to the sun's light
Well
You have used to accompanying with the stones
I have used to watching the poems

Well
Poems alive

18 p.m Oct.18th ,2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/18/2017 10:17:00 AM
An excellent poem.... Welcome to poetry soup
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Shmily Wang
Date: 10/18/2017 10:36:00 AM
Tyvm.I'm very glad to be here and touched by all of your honesty and enthusiasm.Hope to have much more communication.My best regards and wishes!
Date: 10/17/2017 11:00:00 AM
I agree with Darren's comments - lovely use of language...nice little poem, Shmily. My best regards! :) john P.s Welcome to the great "Soup"!
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Shmily Wang
Date: 10/18/2017 3:57:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement.I'll try my best to write poetry.Best wishes for u!
Date: 10/15/2017 8:21:00 AM
What a beautiful poem you have written there... I love the language you use, and especially the final stanza. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Shmily Wang
Date: 10/18/2017 4:01:00 AM
Tyvm.Please criticize and guide more.Best regards!
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