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Elemental

you spin the elements of your life in a vacuum coiled like a snake in perpetual hibernation no light no truth no reason no soft air to touch you inside where living weeps to unwind itself to begin feeling something anything the one thing needed to unravel its lonely existence- a touch of selflessness how do you do it I wonder - survive not knowing how to give or receive the easiest moments of every day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 3/28/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Maggie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congratulatioon your poem Elemental being featured this week, maggie
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Date: 12/21/2008 10:53:00 AM
Maggie, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM " Elemental " I like the Format with the short, concise lines Merry Christmas and may the New Year bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG
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Date: 12/19/2008 11:04:00 AM
Quite haunting....superb. Congrats!!
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Date: 12/18/2008 3:54:00 PM
Maggie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/16/2008 8:31:00 PM
Dear Maggie, Congratulations of your well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Maggie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2008 4:21:00 PM
Much to think about here. The short lines work well to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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