Elemental

you spin 
the elements of your life 
in a vacuum 

coiled 
like a snake 
in perpetual hibernation 

no light 
no truth 
no reason 

no soft air 
to touch you 

inside 

where living weeps 
to unwind itself 

to begin feeling 

something 
anything 

the one thing 
needed to unravel 
its lonely existence- 

a touch 
of selflessness 

how do you do it 
I wonder - 

survive 

not knowing 
how to give 

or receive 

the easiest moments 
of every day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Brown Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Maggie. Love, Carol
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March 27, 2011 at 6:34 PM
Congratulatioon your poem Elemental being featured this week, maggie
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December 21, 2008 at 10:53 AM
Maggie, Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM " Elemental " I like the Format with the short, concise lines Merry Christmas and may the New Year bring YOU and YOURS Health and Prosperity...HG
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December 19, 2008 at 11:04 AM
Quite haunting....superb. Congrats!!
Jordan Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:54 PM
Maggie - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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December 16, 2008 at 8:31 PM
Dear Maggie, Congratulations of your well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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December 15, 2008 at 5:26 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday season. Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Maggie. Love, Carol
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December 14, 2008 at 4:21 PM
Much to think about here. The short lines work well to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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