Poem from critique: Cat
I must confess to feeling like a cat
peering at the shadows of fish.
I want to clap my paw through the surface,
pull each out
of the trembling waves of light.
from my critique for eckho scott, whose poem may be read here: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/forum/topic7487-critique-please.aspx?MessageID=14459#post14459
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