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Paper, pencil, and tea, 
                                    Inspire poet in me. 

                    Green, black, or Darjeeling
                                    Question to determine! 

                      Gems, roses ~ ravishing! 
                                   Poems for you, Darling! 



                                       August 11, 2021
                             In Essence 2 Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Joseph May
                                        PICTURE: 5
              syllables (6 syllables in each line) checked by HMS
                         Three stanzas, each with two lines
                         One internal, one end rhyme in each stanza
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Radhakrishna Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 4:11 AM
Yes, very good! right combination of desirable items! I am trying to understand the rhyme pattern but shall try to write one for the contest.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 4:31 AM
I am sure you will come up with a brilliant one, Krish. Thanks for reading mine.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Hello Mala, this is a beautiful poem done by you. I can see the tea cups filled with tea and a rose on the talble. Love, & Friendship Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Hello Mala, I sometimes do the same thing. Yes i enjoyed this poem. Love -Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Oh Darlene, this was not easy! I was counting syllables again and again, and changing the words. Glad you liked it. Love ~ Mala
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Roses and poetry go so well together, and yes love too. Love your verse Mala.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Thanks, Harry. Oh yes, Love, Rose and Poems! Charming together!
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