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Paper, pencil, and tea, Inspire poet in me. Green, black, or Darjeeling Question to determine! Gems, roses ~ ravishing! Poems for you, Darling! August 11, 2021 In Essence 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May PICTURE: 5 syllables (6 syllables in each line) checked by HMS Three stanzas, each with two lines One internal, one end rhyme in each stanza

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/13/2021 4:11:00 AM

Yes, very good! right combination of desirable items! I am trying to understand the rhyme pattern but shall try to write one for the contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/13/2021 4:31:00 AM

I am sure you will come up with a brilliant one, Krish. Thanks for reading mine.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/12/2021 4:03:00 PM

Hello Mala, this is a beautiful poem done by you. I can see the tea cups filled with tea and a rose on the talble. Love, & Friendship Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2021 11:10:00 AM

Hello Mala, I sometimes do the same thing. Yes i enjoyed this poem. Love -Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/12/2021 4:05:00 PM

Oh Darlene, this was not easy! I was counting syllables again and again, and changing the words. Glad you liked it. Love ~ Mala

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/11/2021 6:27:00 PM

Roses and poetry go so well together, and yes love too. Love your verse Mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/11/2021 6:31:00 PM

Thanks, Harry. Oh yes, Love, Rose and Poems! Charming together!