Poem Disaster

don't let those feelings be your master 
come on with another poem disaster 

poetic justice is what you write 
others try to compare are in for a fight 

yes we delight in the lord above 
get in our way and we have no choice but to shove

total breakdown words don't flow
you thought of everything you don't know

when we fight it's for real 
when your caught up in it you'll surly feel

the flow we bestow will inevitably show
as the lord is our master we don't eat crow

show me the poem and i will show you mine 
mine will leave you in the dust ,left behind

don't let those feelings be your master 
come on with another poem disaster
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Enriquez Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Dear Gregory: A bit of angst is good. Nice read. Leon
Ramos  Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 9:26 PM
thank you leon for your review
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