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I Remember the night we met Austin Texas. Halloween. Neither of us in costumes. Falling oh so quickly, oh so foolishly Love sprouting , flowering jubilantly A delicate dance of Intertwining stems, soft leaves, silken petals Me……...dread locks , patchwork pants You…... long brown hair, unkempt auburn beard You had that favorite tie dyed t- shirt you liked to wear. We married one year later Halloween I remember spiraling autumn leaves dancing auspiciously First day of spring, tears falling from your eyes new baby struggling to breathe I remember her tiny hands, her olive skin I remember Humboldt county where the redwoods kiss the Ocean New baby strapped to back, ferns reaching out over our heads I remember West Yellowstone, camping in the snow. Canvassing at Old faithful. How many times do we watch it blow? Three years unfolding …... We birthed another baby . Sweet rosy cheeks A ray of sunlight in our forest of unknowing Mostly I remember you midst the ferns, where the redwoods kiss the shore. And that tie dyed t- shirt you liked to wear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/5/2016 2:48:00 PM
This was gorgeous, such a beautiful scene you have created and the ending just takes one's breath away. That final stanza, wow. Did you meet on 6th street?
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Faith Byrnes
Date: 12/5/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words. We met by Peace Park.
Date: 12/5/2016 12:51:00 PM
Faith, such a deep poem filled with so much feeling. Thanks for sharing.
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