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Poem 1

A crisp morning breeze - The cat curls up on the couch Dreaming of robins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2009 4:22:00 PM
Nice work this form is a haiku and it has the proper flow to it...Raul
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Date: 2/16/2009 4:22:00 PM
this is a nice 5-7-5 flow ....I would encourage you to put it under the form of "haiku"
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Date: 2/16/2009 1:56:00 PM
hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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Date: 2/16/2009 1:54:00 PM
Kayla, I giggled when I read that. I've always wondered what my cats were dreaming, and you probably have hit it right on the nose. Thanks for sharing, Carolyn
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