Poem 1

A crisp morning breeze -
The cat curls up on the couch
Dreaming of robins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lopez Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 4:22 PM
this is a nice 5-7-5 flow ....I would encourage you to put it under the form of "haiku"
Moreno Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Nice work this form is a haiku and it has the proper flow to it...Raul
Bertrand Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 1:56 PM
hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Kayla, I giggled when I read that. I've always wondered what my cats were dreaming, and you probably have hit it right on the nose. Thanks for sharing, Carolyn
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