Pockets

I hope that God won’t turn His back
I hope the Lord leaves just a crack
Where I may slip within His heart
To beg him for a silver cart.

Please…no gilded chariot of old
With creaky wheels of flaking gold
That split and peel along the way
Then hurriedly fly, to run astray.

Grant to me please mithril spokes
So rancid air’s not trapped nor choked
By thoughtless words of those whose trade
Is flipping hearts to darkened spades.

I beseech and beg for happy thoughts
To share with others who’re distraught
A boutonnière to better cope
A broach for pockets. filled with hope.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 7:24 PM
this is original and sweet, Michelle. Surprised I had not seen it yet.
Austin Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 11:43 AM
I hope the Lord opens up a crack for your wonderful imagination to slip into. The wonderful Mikki is long over due. Love, daver
A   Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 9:35 PM
Michelle Mac Donald , stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
Austin Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 9:22 AM
Love that "silver cart," and the "mithril" spokes. Choice of words here make harmonious sounds, eye catching, mystic. I remember the word, mithril - is it Tolkien? Been so long since I read the Lord of the Rings, I can't remember just what that magic stuff does. Love, daver
Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 6:12 AM
happy thoughts entitle sought, great words of inspiration... love it.....my tongue in cheek effort recent, has no real meaning decent, be not perplexed....
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