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Plumes of Smoke

Plumes of smoke rise up
From dead wood, a red hot fire
Decayed leaves, Autumn

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 9, 2011 at 7:52 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured this week before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Cynthia. The best to you in the contest. Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 3, 2011 at 2:48 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Cynthia. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

March 25, 2009 at 9:54 AM

The aroma of this piece is very strong..your words are beautiful..you paint pictures with words very well.

James Marshall Goff

March 19, 2009 at 8:48 AM

I like this haiku!

March 17, 2009 at 4:08 PM

Good use of multi-sensed imagery in this concise poem. You paint a picture with words. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Keep on writing! Karen