William Kelii Kekaula Poet Sijo

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Plumage

*Image of Plume by Gfycat.

Plumage

A feather swims in a vagrant squall...reeling whilst plummeting,
Its burden then bobs impeccably...outstretched like some mushroom,
Pirouette spirals expel...trivial rippled waves ashore.

2020 June 07
*3rd Place*
BRIAN'S select E,any form,any theme
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 June 12
*2nd Place*
Let the Pens Flow - Sijo
~~Jenish Somadas: Judged 2020 June 11

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Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:42 PM So nice to see one of your poems again.I have been so absent here lately. Big congrats on your fine win, William. William Kelii Kekaula June 13, 2020 at 6:48 PM I am truly grateful for your thoughtful care, Andrea, -- Aloha~@wk

Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 6:53 AM Oh this is such a magnificent write William! Absolutely love it.Congratulations on your win :) William Kelii Kekaula June 12, 2020 at 11:54 AM Appreciate your thoughts, Aditi -- Aloha~@wk

Jenish Somadas June 12, 2020 at 12:52 AM A simple feather creating vibrant waves of words..Great write William..Congratulations.. William Kelii Kekaula June 12, 2020 at 1:45 AM Thank you so much, Jenish -- Aloha~@wk