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*Image of Plume by Gfycat. Plumage A feather swims in a vagrant squall...reeling whilst plummeting, Its burden then bobs impeccably...outstretched like some mushroom, Pirouette spirals expel...trivial rippled waves ashore. 2020 June 07 *3rd Place* BRIAN'S select E,any form,any theme ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 June 12 *2nd Place* Let the Pens Flow - Sijo ~~Jenish Somadas: Judged 2020 June 11

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Date: 6/13/2020 6:42:00 PM
So nice to see one of your poems again.I have been so absent here lately. Big congrats on your fine win, William.
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Date: 6/13/2020 6:48:00 PM
I am truly grateful for your thoughtful care, Andrea, -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/12/2020 6:53:00 AM
Oh this is such a magnificent write William! Absolutely love it.Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/12/2020 11:54:00 AM
Appreciate your thoughts, Aditi -- Aloha~@wk
Date: 6/12/2020 12:52:00 AM
A simple feather creating vibrant waves of words..Great write William..Congratulations..
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Date: 6/12/2020 1:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenish -- Aloha~@wk

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