Plum Wings

Plum
wings,
plucky
is the strum
of love’s afterglow
With purple locks and negligee,
angel flew to hubby under sateen satin sheets
Lavender ruffling, at the midnight hour, had couple vibing in synchronicity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Empress Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Intriguing and descriptive diction so well articulated throughout, i love especially the last lines . Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing this
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Hind Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Ahhh so cute, Kim. Loved it!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Wolf Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 7:54 PM
synchronicity - no better way! ~ Good Vibrations
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 9:45 PM
Now I have the Beachboys song in my head!
One Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Wonderful imagery and use of words here.. I think Ink will like this one.. the last two lines are brilliant..
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 1:29 PM
I really appreciate that! Thank you :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 2:10 AM
Wow. Negligee, satin, thank God I'm past these illusions. Lovely poem though. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 4:41 AM
LOL! Thank you, sweet poet!
Sharma  Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 10:20 PM
Oh, this is a beautiful Fibonacci dear Kim.. I really love 'plum wings' .. It's very unique! I like how within few words you've created a love-hued ambience and painted a scene of enchantment.. "love’s afterglow", "Lavender ruffling, at the midnight hour" Very romantic and gorgeously knitted.. Sending best wishes for the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Thank you for sharing what you liked! Hugs ~ Kim
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