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Plum Wings

Plum
wings,
plucky
is the strum
of love’s afterglow
With purple locks and negligee,
angel flew to hubby under sateen satin sheets
Lavender ruffling, at the midnight hour, had couple vibing in synchronicity

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2024

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Ink Empress Date: 1/27/2024 10:52:00 AM Intriguing and descriptive diction so well articulated throughout, i love especially the last lines . Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing this Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/27/2024 3:28:00 PM Thank you, my friend!

Paige Hind Date: 1/21/2024 4:54:00 PM Ahhh so cute, Kim. Loved it! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/21/2024 7:23:00 PM Thank you, sweet friend!

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/18/2024 7:54:00 PM synchronicity - no better way! ~ Good Vibrations Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2024 9:45:00 PM Now I have the Beachboys song in my head!

Silent One Date: 1/18/2024 12:30:00 PM Wonderful imagery and use of words here.. I think Ink will like this one.. the last two lines are brilliant.. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2024 1:29:00 PM I really appreciate that! Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/18/2024 2:10:00 AM Wow. Negligee, satin, thank God I'm past these illusions. Lovely poem though. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2024 4:41:00 AM LOL! Thank you, sweet poet!

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/17/2024 10:20:00 PM Oh, this is a beautiful Fibonacci dear Kim.. I really love 'plum wings' .. It's very unique! I like how within few words you've created a love-hued ambience and painted a scene of enchantment.. "love’s afterglow", "Lavender ruffling, at the midnight hour" Very romantic and gorgeously knitted.. Sending best wishes for the contest! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2024 4:42:00 AM Thank you for sharing what you liked! Hugs ~ Kim