Plug Away - Bt Title Revised

Today I work
so I may then
tomorrow play.

Dec. 7, 2020
 for charles messina's Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest
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Messina Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 9:43 PM
Working hard can sure pay off in the long run. Well done, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
Daniel Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 10:50 PM
Lovely one, Andrea, don't we all?
Horne Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 12:33 PM
i'd never tried this form before - love this
Watt Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 3:10 PM
Nicely done! Two-word title for contest?
Krutsinger Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:52 AM
In nine words you have summed up one of the most spectacular reasons most of us work.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 11:20 PM
I know nothing about this form which seems to be very much to the point. Work today, plat tomorrow. ~~
Dome Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Short but so sweet. So clever. well done.
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Always a good motive for work...Mix a little pleasure in there so that life won't be a big work load. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 1:40 PM
water is so clear, so we can see the depth!!
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