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Plucked For You

Plucked for you, this little flower
Given in earnest, modest gift
Posies and love bloom by the hour
Plucked for you, this little flower
Sun kissed and rain wet by shower
Hoping yellow, your worries lift
Plucked for you, this little flower
Given in earnest, modest gift

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Arturo Michael Date: 12/24/2017 6:09:00 AM I want to wish you a dream come true on this Christmas day...and to thank you for being a friend here...It's a blessing to share poetry with you...again...I wish you a dream come true, Rhoda Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 12/25/2017 11:09:00 AM Thank you, Arturo. You are a Sweetheart. Merry Christmas, Dear.

Michael Whipps Date: 12/5/2017 6:21:00 AM Nice poem! I am having trouble figuring out if you are speaking of a virgin? Please do not roast me for this...it is, by all means, a serious question. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 12/5/2017 6:40:00 AM Interesting you should ask, because I left it to the readers interpretation. I think anytime we do something as a "first", this may fit... From there, you may decide...:))

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/2/2017 9:44:00 AM Very sweet. I saw on your list that you are trying the forms as listed here? That's what I did, apart from the ones I learned in English class. So many, huh? This is indeed sweet. I think triolet was one of my first attempts. Blessings ... and Happy Imagination ... CayCay Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/2/2017 2:08:00 PM Same reason I tried them! Love words and word challenges, song lyrics ... Well, I am chatty this moment so I'll tell you true, iambic pentameter is something I personally fake my way through. Just recently a spark of clarity went off in my brain, I got it, had it, then I doubted it and went back to faking it. BUT I'll share more concrete and actually helpful (I HOPE) feedback in a private soup message sometime soon. k? Rhoda Tripp Date: 12/2/2017 11:20:00 AM Thank you, sweet CayCay. Yes. I'm trying for all forms just to be able to feel the accomplishment. I've had no formal education in literature, I'm just fumbling through it with my imagination and the ability to follow instructions and count syllables. Btw...wth is iambic pentameter? Lol

Arturo Michael Date: 11/29/2017 8:20:00 PM Here's a little romance...really nice... All the best Rhoda Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 11/29/2017 8:41:00 PM Thank you, Dear.

John Gondolf Date: 11/29/2017 4:41:00 AM Nicely done, Rhoda. I tried using this form and found it difficult, you did it very well. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 11/29/2017 11:37:00 AM Thank you, John. Yep. This form is utter and complete frustration, but I love a good challenge. Appreciate your comments

Edward Mccall Date: 11/28/2017 9:09:00 AM I really enjoyed this one another sweet write Rhoda. Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 11/28/2017 9:26:00 AM Thank you, Dear.

Paul Callus Date: 11/26/2017 3:46:00 AM I like this form, Rhoda; in fact I just chose this one to read because of that. You have tackled it well, and even the content goes to reveal a positive side of your character. Regards // paul Login to Reply Rhoda Tripp Date: 11/26/2017 7:56:00 AM Thank you, Paul, for reading and your compliment. My goal is to try every form. Please do stop by to read as you are able. I appreciate your opinions, good or bad. Here to learn.