Pledging Allegiance

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grand says, “come and see!” hummingbirds attracted to stars stripes red white blue 9/5/2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/6/2020 12:07:00 PM

I'm trying to fathom the significance of this, but my feeble brain is flailing and failing... ~ Hmmmmmmmng

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 5:29:00 AM

Basically I saw two hummingbirds around my American flag. Nice moment.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/6/2020 3:56:00 AM

I see very nice poem! Have a great time.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2020 6:18:00 AM

Thank you, Abdullah!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/6/2020 1:39:00 AM

This made me smile and pause as I thought of it and visualized.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2020 6:18:00 AM

This happened! Boys always see the best things!