Pleasus

Pleasus
How can Jesus please us
when all we do is cry
about how life has done us wrong
when we're the reason why?
© ron wilson arbuthnot
aka vee bdosa the doylestown poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Christian Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 3:41 PM
that is good
Bdosa Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Thank you Diane, sometimes short and simple is best.
Deremer Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 2:00 PM
I really liked your poem.
Bdosa Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 3:04 PM
ThankQ Pam, that one was so hard to write, seems the shorter they are the harder they are to finish.
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