Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Pleasure of Growth-W

Lust is a part of life
To choose pleasure of growth
One requires rain and wind
But they do give pain.
I was possessed by a woman
I tried to seduce her in her adultery
To whom I begged for sex
Surrendering to the crafty woman
I was shredded to pieces.
Now I suffer from love sickness.
Have you ever tasted the pain of love?
I have suffered from love sickness
But then, what is life without passion & mystery.
One has got to be lured to passion,
Living life safely is always dangerous.

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Date ; 24-1-14
Form : Free Verse
Dr. Ram Mehta
Third Place win
Contest: Don't Write for the Contest by Vicky Tsulima

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Robin Davis March 16, 2014 at 10:19 PM Dr. Ram What a very intense and interesting write. You certainly kept the reader enthralled till the end. Thanks for the nice comment on my Hateful Heart poem.

Kelly Deschler January 31, 2014 at 6:46 PM A very passionate and heartfelt write. Great work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!

Nette Onclaud January 29, 2014 at 5:15 PM thought -provoking, dr. ram, and so well expressed.. sweet congrats!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux January 29, 2014 at 9:14 AM Congratulations Dr. Ram, a courageous write. Love is indeed dangerous but oh so invigorating.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 29, 2014 at 9:02 AM Immoral love is the usually more dangerous one. A fascinating poem and i likd the structure u crafted it. Its nice yor profession leaves u time for fine poetry. Thnx! Dr.Ram Mehta January 29, 2014 at 7:27 PM I have retired from the job since 1994, zaynub S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 29, 2014 at 9:09 AM Oh i forgot to say congrats on yor win

Vicky Tsiluma January 29, 2014 at 12:47 AM 'Pain of love' - I like how you've developed the theme. We normally expect growth but we only want the good parts of it and not the pain it may bring. Well written poem!

Robin Davis December 30, 2013 at 8:27 AM Dr. Ram You captured the meaning of love and life. Both are dangerous in their own way, but without danger things would be boring and not worth getting up for. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment and congrats on my Crazily Contagious poem. Dr.Ram Mehta December 30, 2013 at 9:40 AM Do write something about my poetic muse when you feel so.robin Dr.Ram Mehta December 30, 2013 at 9:39 AM Thanks for all your visits to my poems, old and new

Robert A. Dufresne May 1, 2010 at 6:41 PM Living life safely is always dangerous... heh heh.. love that line. hmmm surrendering to crafty women may be the same as surrendering to love sickness and pain. Been there done that but there needs be a less dangerous way to be safe and a safer way to be dangerous, ...though I know not what that is ... interesting poem. Thanks for the comment.- Robert

Joe Flach April 30, 2010 at 10:02 PM Great write. I think it is the experience of the lust, the pain, the passion & mystery that allows you (us) to write our poems. Thanks for sharing Dr.

Doris Culverhouse April 30, 2010 at 7:53 PM yes, dangerous, especially if there is a jealous spouse.

Skat A April 30, 2010 at 7:23 PM WOW 2 THIS ONE . ENJOYED, YOU HAVE YOUR SELF A GOOD WEEKEND, ALSO THIS IS SUCH A PLEASURE 2 READ,, IRMA XXX THANKS FOR THE COMMENT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 30, 2010 at 7:11 PM Welll this is a bombshell poem Dr. Ram and a new favorite of mine tonight.. u have captured the entire essence of luv.. its pleasure and pain.. and to answer your question ...YES .. have been there and done that .. your first line is so powerful.. enjoyed..luv..from the "Sweetheart"