Please Stop Drinking And Driving

Traffic Safety Poetry Contest
Miranda Hawley

It's a happy-sad ending hour at many bars
Where the parking lots are fool of cars
Where many of these spiteful patrons arrive
And then drink over the limit and some nose-dive
Mothers against drunk driving are calling
Fix your unruly ways because it’s appalling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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mysore Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 2:44 AM
'fool of cars/ nose-dive/ unruly ways' amazing write dear poet. Congratulations on your win, happy writing.
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December 9, 2024 at 6:18 PM
Appalling, and down right dangerous. I agree with the message of "fix your unruly ways..." Congrats on your win in my contest.
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