Please Read Me!!!!

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My sister got sick yesterday
In the hospital bed she lay
Was suppose to come home today
Got sicker so she had to stay
Was shaking so bad 
Mom thought a seizer  was what she was having
That wasn't the case
Temperature shoot up to 103.00 so fast
She was shaking so bad
Mom called nurse in room
Another day she has to spend in that room...



*This is true, as we speak my 5 year old sister is in the hospital. Even though u dont
know us please pray for her....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ingle Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 9:36 PM
I do pray that your sister is ok now...I don't like hospitals, but what would we do without them...Those fevers can scare a person..that 103 temperature didn't sound good..I again, hope she is doing fine now and recuperating..Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
White Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 10:11 AM
I work in a hospital. So this realy grabbed me. I will definetly pray for her.
Guzzi Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 1:13 PM
So sorry to hear this Breena. Of course I will pray for you. If your sis likes to be read to or sung to if you do that very softly when you visit her she will know you're there loving her, very softly hon so only she hears you. Love & Light Debbie
Lakhera Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 11:46 PM
Oh she'll be in my prayers. Just don't worry, have faith in lord. Sending lots of blessing to your sis and your family~Chitra
Matheny Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 6:20 PM
Awwww!!! I will pray sissy, I promise!! :) And ok (on the texting me on friday) Love Your Friend Alexz ^_-
Anish Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:52 PM
Hope your sister is O.K. Thanks for your comment on Black Ice.
Jordan Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:45 PM
Breana - Have no doubt that your sister will not only be in my families prayers but I will also have my Church hold her in prayer - keep the faith Hon - God Bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:39 PM
Your little sister will be in my prayers, too. So sorry hon, hang in there. They will take good care of her, she is in good hands. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 5:31 PM
I'm so sorry, and I will pray that your little sister is much better very soon! Try not to worry too much, they will take good care of her. Love, Carrie
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