Edward Ibeh Poet Triolet

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Please, Not Yet

Don't leave me here by my lonesome
just like the full moon above me;
Let us seize the night and be free
Don't leave me here by my lonesome
My world would crumble should you flee
Please, do give a thought to my plea
Don't leave me here by my lonesome
just like the full moon above me


Triolet - Old Or New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
Date written: 08/29/2020
Date submitted: 08/23/2022

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Anna Hopper September 12, 2020 at 11:22 AM Congratulations on your amazing win! Edward Ibeh September 12, 2020 at 12:21 PM Thank you so much, Anna:-) It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance!

Paghunda Zahid September 2, 2020 at 7:13 PM Amazing.. Congratulations on your win Edward Ibeh September 3, 2020 at 9:48 AM Thank you so much, Paghunda:-)

Carol Mitra August 31, 2020 at 9:23 PM Truly amazing and moon gaze worthy....Congrats Edward on your win. Edward Ibeh September 1, 2020 at 3:29 AM Thanks so much, Carol:-) Blessings to you! <3

Sam Kauffman August 31, 2020 at 12:05 PM Such a plaintive love song, Edward. Love the phrase repetition! Sending you congratulations so you won't to celebrate "all by your lonesome! Many blessing on your day. Edward Ibeh August 31, 2020 at 3:09 PM Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, Sam:-) Blessings, my friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2020 at 1:00 PM Hello Edward, I do not blame you. to sit in the lovely moonlight alone is so sad. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2020 at 3:49 PM Hello Edward, I hope that you had a good weekend. Enjoy your evening my friend. Edward Ibeh August 30, 2020 at 2:25 PM Thank you, Darlene:-) Enjoy your as well!

Jenna Logan August 30, 2020 at 6:30 AM This is filled with such a heartfelt plea. Well written, Edward. Edward Ibeh August 30, 2020 at 2:24 PM Thank you, Jenna:-)