Please No Sympathy

The ice is frozen, painted on,
a statue of justice falls down,
scattering the remains of reasonable doubt
awaiting the next disaster
soon to come

I don't need you, but I can't move on,
once so high, but I've lost my crown
and this pain so dense I can only scream and shout,
and run away faster
all because we're done

and though it was fun,
though I still can't forget you,
I need you to disappear
and believe the lies, no more truth
because you're gone   



***still working on it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 7:26 PM
it is great as is. a very fine piece of poetry.
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