Please My Love: Seek No Help For Me

Love love love I lay my hands over you and rest
beside you as I see the stars blinding my thoughts, my mind,
making me a living socket of rejoice.
Proportion as a day may seem but mind me not
for I seek and desire to spend it all with you, right in your arms.

My love I am addicted to you,
please take me not to the rehab
for I won’t mind to die high of you.
My dreams are attached to you,
my smile is defined by the love you give to me.

My love I am infected by you,
please take me not to the hospital
for I won't mind to die fully blown by you.
My thoughts are drawn by your love,
my happiness is a smear of your heart.

My love I am crazy in love with you,
please take me not to a pastor or sangoma
for I won't mind to die completely lost in you.
My heart beat relies on how much you love me,
my laughter is a true expression of my satisfaction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/19/2016 7:41:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:41:00 PM
you will have fun, Ndumiso, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
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Ndumiso Sikhakhane
Date: 8/31/2013 6:50:00 AM
wow that's nice, I would really love to be your friend and thanks for the warm welcome
Date: 8/30/2013 10:06:00 AM
hi, Ndumiso , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ndumiso Sikhakhane
Date: 8/30/2013 10:59:00 AM
thank yu very much, I am really pleased to be with you and hope to have lot of fun
Date: 8/30/2013 5:24:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Ndumiso ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Ndumiso Sikhakhane
Date: 8/30/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thank you very much dear, I am very much humbled and thankful
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