Please Mum


Scrummy cakes
All different shapes
Which one shall I choose
A chocolate éclair
A currant bun
To see these delights is truly fun
I taste them ~ I smell them
I cannot ignore them
So please Mum
 buy me one...


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Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/22/2023 11:31:00 AM

Had no idea you were writing! Great, Congratulations, Pangie

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/22/2023 9:50:00 PM

Dearest Panagiota Thank you dear friend. I haven't written much as P has taken over and things are not great at moment. However, have written a few poems lately. Will write soon dear friend , with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/22/2023 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "PLEASE MUM" is a lovely write. How about one of each??? Have a blessed day writing away..........

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/22/2023 9:52:00 PM

dear Paula, how lovely to hear from you and so pleased you enjoyed my poem. I hope you are well and thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 8:44:00 AM

This is a lovely poem Ann.. I hope you are well.. Congratulations on your win..

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2023 12:48:00 PM

I'm sorry to hear about your Parkinsons...Glad it doesn't prevent you from writing poetry All the best my friend

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/21/2023 9:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One, so good to hear from you and thanks for your kind words of encouragement. I am not so good as my Parkinson's is sadly moving on, as it will being degenerative... however I still enjoy writing poetry when I feel able. I hope you are keeping well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann x

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2023 7:51:00 AM

Dear Ann, thank you for taking part in the contest. Congratulations on your win, great flow in your words as well in the description and mood of the painting. God bless

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/21/2023 9:29:00 AM

Dear Eve, many thanks for my placement in your contest, and so glad you enjoyed my poem. Really enjoyed the contest Eve,, thankyou... With kindest thoughts Ann xx