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she mastered her destiny, implementing thoughts of the perfect recipe. Crafted with a careful 
eye, her goals will not be denied. She breathed the gift of life, and marveled at its 
presence, in the creation lies her essence, style blended with grace, like a goddess who 
wields her title effortlessly, what more can you expect from the creator of salon destiny..
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March 26, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Anthony Bell, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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August 10, 2015 at 7:15 PM
ANTHONY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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May 21, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Hi Anthony I echo Shars comments. Each single line within my own writing conveys a single thought when I'm writing. It seems to work for me although I've had no poetic training, I just write from the heart. This is a beautiful poem. Truly enjoyed reading it! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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May 21, 2009 at 8:25 AM
I would simply write in verse style instead of paragraph. For example wherever you have a comma and a period, just make it a new line instead. It's pretty great other than the form it is in. It will be easier to read this way. Try it and see how it works! Good luck. Love, Shar
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