Please Critique My Write - Why I Refuse Such Requests

Please Critique My Write

By Elton Camp

There’s a request from which I intend to shrink
“I want you to tell me what you really think”
It may seem to ask your honest opinion to tell
But unless it’s praise they’ll be as mad as hell

Although I’ve gotten pulled into this trap before
That’s certainly not going to happen any more
Even if the write is dull, error-filled and trite
What they want to hear is your endless delight

Even the slightest criticism will drive them wild
It’s almost as if you had just slapped their child
And whether it’s a stranger or some friend,
Know that you’ll never hear from them again

But you must expect them to publicly criticize
And say you are presumptuous, mean and tell lies
But, to your advantage that actually may work
For you’ll never again have to deal with that jerk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 30, 2011 at 7:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning as real as it comes Elton. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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June 30, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Oh my, this is so funny and so very true, made me laugh out loud. Fell into that trap when I first joined PS and got blocked for my trouble. Very well written and an absolute joy to read, well done. Regards
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