Please Be My Friend

I got nothing to relate to, too anyone on Facebook; this is depressing why cant i find a real friend on here. why is that so difficult? -Being a total bee complaining about not have a friend or life when having a head and body with legs. I think to myself why doesn't she just get up and find some. Is she afraid? I know why but not trying she already gave up. Why complain on the surface of a screen of a computer, a mirror, or at someone and thing. When you can do it yourself? I don't understand what people could want from you, or want you to be but you are you and I am myself we can not change this because were both individuals. I would like to be your friend but your already showing sign that make me not want to talk to you. But I will because your lonely and you look like you need someone there so I'll let you rest your head on my shoulders so you can feel complete because I am generous with my life. You don't know me but I have done bad things the things that you say that you can do. That I know that is a lie that you tell anyone talking to you, but I'll listen not because I think you want someone to hear you. But because I know you can be something more than me and this is why I'm your friend. I also need a shoulder to lay on whither or not you become successful I will be there not because I love you or liked you because I don't want you to be alone and cold and give your life away for some stupid reason that you feel is okay. I want to see not just you faults but your achievements. You to come up with the most beautiful profound logic that even i cant disagree with. Your sitting there without a clue of what you have, I will be with you because you can be both the rise of an empire and its fall I want to see this and how you handle it. I wont care if you send me away, or think I'm causing your downfall. I want to see that you can be everything you can by just having friend. And how much can become with just this. Your sitting there without a clue with what you can achieve and be. I will be our friend. Even if it means my very end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/30/2011 1:28:00 PM
Very interesting,,, thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 10/30/2011 7:45:00 AM
True friends are truly in short supply. I have many FB acquaintances but very few I would call friends even though I am always open for making new ones. Thanks for sharing. Steve
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Date: 10/29/2011 2:03:00 PM
I'll be your friend :-) Your words read like you need someone to talk to.I'll be waiting..... :-)
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Dayneissa Byrd
Date: 10/29/2011 6:14:00 PM
Thank you I think i do need some to talk to too. Thank you for you comment I feel a little better knowing that.
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