Please

Why do you come to me? Haven’t I told you to leave me alone? Do you think I want you? You’re nothing but trouble. I don’t wait for you. You haven’t got what I want. Don’t come near me. Please, don’t come near me. Don’t touch me. Please don’t do that. Please stop. Please, oh please ----.

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Edward Mccall

Date: 7/7/2017 9:26:00 AM

What a powerful and straightforward write Alfred it pulls the reader in and doesn't let you go even after you're finished reading it Nicely done.

Alfred Berggren
Date: 7/7/2017 10:41:00 AM

Hi Ed, thanks again for all your kind words.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 7/6/2017 8:38:00 PM

wow, this is such an abrupt write Alfred, it's maybe a free verse, good stuff, it dragged me along to he end so well.

Alfred Berggren
Date: 7/6/2017 9:55:00 PM

Thanks Lewis for reading my poem and leaving such great comment. Your words mean so much to me.