Please

Please release me from the pain I feel

Please release me from this sadness that is so real

Please save me from  the darkness that I
Have within 

Please someone help me tell me where do I begin 

Please send help now I can't wait until tomorrow 

Please show me how to handle my unbridled Sorrow 

Please show me a sign to show someone is there 

Please send  me some help to show that you  care 

Please tell me you hear me and you will try to end my Sorrow 

Please be my saviour and make it a better tomorrow..

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/13/2025 8:05:00 AM

This is fine because it addresses our new Age. We have fewer connections , fewer friends, and fewer safety nets. We are separated by technology. I hope we.can reestablish and reconnect with friends. Best wishes.

Deb M

Date: 8/7/2025 2:43:00 AM

Paul your words touched me as l could feel your desperation, sadness and honesty in them. l obviously can’t help you, l can only offer you support in words. I am sorry you are feeling this way after reading your bio l fully understand why. Its sounds like life hasn't been kind or fair to you. Can you reach out to a loved one a friend, a Dr , Help line and chat or just get outside…away from those four walls because they do not help and distraction does even if its just temporary! Take care…Debx