please

light leaks
over craggy red
peaks
and seeps 
through the
single glazed

a slinky 
silhouette 
spins a
pirouette 
mews 
stretches
and rubs
against the
the window pane
 
gooey foggy
anesthesia clings
like dew
to a day that's 
too new
to unbundle 
from down under 
this comforter

little bug
sneaks in
for a hug
her blanky
dragging
her diaper
sagging 
crawls onto
my chest
and there
she rests
soft  cheek 
on my shoulder
gently I hold her
so still
I feel
her little lungs breathing
her little heart beating
against mine

snuggled up
in the dawn
never live
too long 
to not measure
life's treasure
in moments
like these 
not to say
thank you
and
more 

many
more

please

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Date: 11/23/2023 12:21:00 PM
You expressed this so wonderfully... great weaving of words here...
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Steven Young
Date: 11/24/2023 8:22:00 AM
Appreciate your comment. Thank you!
Date: 11/23/2023 5:59:00 AM
Awww this is so sweet. I'll bet the little bugger is cute as can be
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Steven Young
Date: 11/23/2023 6:11:00 AM
Oh, she is the apple if her grandpa's eye. Thanks for commenting.
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