Winter Wallace Poet I do not know?

Pleas and Poison

Who takes the last breath in the summer sun?
I'll die in autumn disaster smiling for the purity I've seen

Sullen sun rain on me
A fleeing soul into the dark and deep

Sleep
No thought
No Touch
No words


Kisses never here
Smile forgotten

Make me stone when i am dead
Take away my name

Tell god i've been shamed since Cesarean escape....
...I didn't know what I was getting into.....

I'll take my last look when the summer comes

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Sara Kendrick November 24, 2009 at 4:28 AM Interesting thoughts put to pen in this one. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Brandee Augustus November 21, 2009 at 1:45 PM Congratulations on placing in Matt's contest!

Carrie Richards November 20, 2009 at 3:40 PM This is a very deep and thoughtful write! Well deserving this win in Matt's contest! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

Logan Saucillo November 20, 2009 at 1:04 PM a very touching poem. very interesting indeed. keep writing =)

Debbie Guzzi November 9, 2009 at 12:48 PM very moving....the last line carrys a punch too! Light & Love

Nadia Shahwan November 6, 2009 at 10:51 AM This is an interesting poem. All the best.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 5, 2009 at 9:21 AM Your excellent poetry was a joy to read today Kalonji. I am wishing you a fun filled inspiring day. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire November 4, 2009 at 7:58 AM Such a deep sense of longing and sadness in this write, Kalonji. Clever reference to the "Cesarean escape." Surely, babes who come into this world never know what awaits them in the future. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 4, 2009 at 6:59 AM Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara