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Pleading

My Love, You look very tired Your eyes are bulged and sore Why, couldn't you find the comb? Your hair needs a groom Hasn't your sister ironed your clothes? Who cook your meals? Has mama come home? My love, Enough is enough Stop all my therapies no more chemo’s Please, Please take me home. Yes I know I only have few days more Let’s sing our favorites tonight If can, we sway in the dim candle light Lie side by side and watch the moon smiles You need a rest My Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/3/2013 9:20:00 PM
Nice but sad poem...it foreshadows death.
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/4/2013 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Christine. sorry for the delay to acknoledge.
Date: 5/2/2013 9:43:00 PM
I like your pleading poem, Manel. you gave her resting mind a little comfort through your love... heartfelt~ LINDA
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/2/2013 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I read your poem on "Grand pa" several time. It is a masterpiece. A poet in this caliber commenting on my poems really makes me grow. Thank you Love and Hugs manel

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