Playing With Words Under Fire

Playing with words under fire While playing with words under fire Sometimes it seems you get burned Choosing the verbs to inspire Tossing out nouns that you learned Flames filled with passion start glowing Careful that you don’t offend Found in the verses you’re showing What is the message you send Feeling the heat of the season Striking a match in the cold Make sure you pick the right reason So they will know what is told Embers of orange and yellow Sit in a pile in your line Harsh often turns out quite mellow Everything seems to be fine Ink from your pen quickly searing Dripping like wax from a wick There will be some who are cheering Any old topic you pick But there are times you have written Thoughts of your every desire Hurting the one you are smitten While playing with words under fire
10/03/18 For the Playing With Words Under Fire Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger
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Daniel Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 8:11 AM
This is an excellent rhyme, Chris:) congratulations on your win:)
Green Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Thank you so much Jo. I am happy you liked it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Congrats on your win, Chris. Well penned.
Green Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, I appreciate your kindness
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 3:56 PM
I loved how you incorporate how words can hurt at times, the very one you love. Superb entry Chris! Congratulations on your win! : )
Green Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Thank you so very much Connie. You always leave the nicest comments for me
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 2:12 PM
I do not usually fall in love with rhyming poems but in this case, I fell head-over-ink-pen in love with this one! Congratulations, Chris!
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October 5, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Thanks you so much Caren. It was a honor to enter your contest and a grand surprise to have placed so high in the competition. Thank you again so much.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Back with congratulations! xomo <3
Green Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Thanks so much my friend.
Y. Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Hi Chris, This is a great entry for the contest theme. Your use of words is always good whether it's for a contest or just because. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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October 4, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Hi Alexis. Thanks so much. I saw the contest title and thought it sounded like fun so I wrote this. I am happy you liked it so much.
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 2:01 PM
- Play with words ... yes, we must often be careful - A little flame can be a big disaster fire - A lovely poem Chris - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your kind thoughts
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Lovely images! Verse 3 and 5 are my favorites! Great, Chris!
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October 4, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Thank you so very much Kim
Sands Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 2:54 PM
This is great for the contest and yes, that can happen. Well written! :)
Green Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Heidi, I'm glad you liked it.
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 2:30 PM
impressive use of diction which flames this page and my senses as well, chris...well done..huggs
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October 3, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thanks so much Nette. I appreciate your kindness.
Warrior Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Nice one, Chris...burn on my friend...love & light...^WW^
Green Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked it.
Bauer Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 12:21 PM
brilliant! best of luck in the contest, chris! this sounds like a winning entry to me...
Green Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene. I am happy you liked it.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 9:41 AM
So good! Good morning dear souper <3 xomo
Green Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Thanks again my friend.
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