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Playing Ball

I reached in to pull out my all playing ball … without alcohol Head up, I breathed brave and stepped up to the plate … felt like dodge ball bait Sunshiny bases enticed my run-gained mount … on feared three-two count Bat smacked contact so I ran like a wildcat … clawed first base splayed flat I reached in to pull out my all playing ball … fun enriched windfall - worth future recall ... CayCay Jennings November 2, 2018

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Sandra Haight

Date: 12/4/2018 8:19:00 PM

CayCay, like all the others below, I found your excellent poem a fun one too! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2018 3:32:00 PM

what a fun poem CayCay I found it very entertaining especially as I know nothing of this sport:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 10:33:00 AM

Oh that's great; beautifully penned; great imagery and thoroughly enjoyable.

John Gondolf

Date: 11/4/2018 11:44:00 AM

I enjoyed this fun poem, CayCay, nicely written. Best of luck in the contest. John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2018 6:31:00 PM

this is fun, fun, fun! I enjoyed seeing your rhymes and how that first one was not so obvious to me and then I got it! I love baseball and this poem you came up with for nina.

Chris Green

Date: 11/2/2018 11:21:00 AM

This was really cute my friend. To me, this poem is a home run. :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/2/2018 10:20:00 AM

Let's play ball CayCay...lovely write my friend...batter up!...love & light...^WW^