playground flight hiku

For Sir Brian Strand's 1402 Poetry Contest 

7 August 2025 




         
               \o                    o/    up and down we go,
                 \___________/
                          |||||
                   ____|||||____    laughing through the air like birds ~
                 /                       \
               /                           \
         __/_________________\__  weightless afternoon.
       /                                          \
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Godwin Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 1:43 AM
Congrats, Sir. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 9:05 AM
Fun one!
Daniels Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Your usual insightful clear architectural word creations are always a pleasure to find, Sir Bernard. Know that you bring much light to this site. Playground blessings your way. x.
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August 6, 2025 at 5:03 PM
excellent! Best wishes with the contest!
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