Players Not Spectators

The myths of innocence & simplicity
hide beneath a mask of fraility
within youthful pleasures of times long past
human desire forever heads the cast;
What seemed simple then,is just relative
through rose-tinted spectacles,we forgive,
forget so easily life's reality,
vulnerable,alone in our self-pity;
Circumstance has moved on,we have stayed
transfixed by myths,our memories frayed;
twenty-four hours,still was then, a day
but different complications held sway.

Our times change,yet inside we remain the same
as players,not spectators in the game

 Year Posted 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Times were different then, as we were young.. but the years tend to slow us down like a car growing with age..
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Read a few times. Great nuggets inside your rhyme. Great opening line, Brian!
Radice Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Your 11 year old poem speaks relevance to me and many of my poems Brian. Despite the past being a foreign country (they do things differently there) I still think I'm 26 and not 59. Perhaps I'm growing down - or just standing still? Perhaps, with our whole lives in front of us back then our naivety drove us on. Knowing the rules is not always a good thing. Cheers - Gary
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September 18, 2021 at 4:56 AM
We still play but our uniforms are a bit ill fitting and tattered....
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