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Played Me For a Fool

I had seen a sea of love in her eyes in that drenching night in monsoon season when the first time we met that my love tries to forget and I can't find the reason why? No more will I listen to her lies when she insists she can't love me and cries. ~"A Rhyme in 60" contest by Laura Loo.

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Date: 2/3/2017 8:09:00 AM
A sad tail, Abdul, well told.
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Date: 2/3/2017 1:21:00 AM
Very emotional and beautiful at the same time... Congrats Abdul, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/2/2017 7:05:00 PM
Abdul, I love the emotion of this one. GREAT job!
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Date: 1/29/2017 12:55:00 PM
aww a sad rhyme Abdul - a sea of love butin the end crocodile tears:-( hugs jan xx
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