Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Rhyme

Played Me For a Fool

I had seen a sea of love in her eyes 
in that drenching night one monsoon season 
when we met the first time that now she tries 
to deny and I can't find the reason 
why? No more will I listen to her lies 
when she insists she can't love me and cries



~"A Rhyme in 60" contest by Laura Loo.

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James Inman February 3, 2017 at 8:09 AM A sad tail, Abdul, well told.

Teddy Kimathi February 3, 2017 at 1:21 AM Very emotional and beautiful at the same time... Congrats Abdul, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2017 at 7:05 PM Abdul, I love the emotion of this one. GREAT job!

Jan Allison January 29, 2017 at 12:55 PM aww a sad rhyme Abdul - a sea of love butin the end crocodile tears:-( hugs jan xx