Notes About The Poem

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Play It Safe Or Venture Out

Swimming in the shallow end
is fairly safe and sound,

you can't go down very deep
before you touch the ground.

Swimming in the deeper end
means there's more room for play,

the cost is that there is more risk,
and you may have to pay.

Play it safe or venture out;
you choose what you will do.

No one else will make your way,
it's always up to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Coulstock Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 1:27 AM
Although simplified I love the wisdom you express and the way you do it.
Snowden Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Keep it Simple! I try to keep them short and sweet sometimes so I keep the kids' attention. It's hard to compete with all the awesome games and apps out there! -Cary
Sutalo Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Very good Cary in describing deeper waters as a risk but it's worth the venture.
Snowden Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Thank you, Adrian! I've always found the greater rewards are on the other side of greater risk, but there is some wisdom in treading with safety in mind. ;-) Thanks for the note; I'm glad you liked it! -Cary
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